For the past
2 months, I have learnt how to summarize points from an article by extracting
the relevant main points. In addition, I learnt how to include my own opinions
through the writing of the reader response and realized how to differentiate my
opinions from the author’s view. Writing the problem solution essay allowed me
to organize my essay with a clear structure so that is easy for readers to
understand by ensuring my point of view is presented clearly. Besides learning
the essay structure, I also learnt how do write a proper thesis statement and
topic statement. We also worked on the referencing skills where the APA
citation is used as it is essential that we credit the author when borrowing
their ideas in order to prevent plagiarism. Through all these exercises, I have
indeed improved my English language as I understand my glaring grammatical
errors such as verb tense, verb form, word form and subject-verb agreement.
Furthermore, the online grammar exercises were helpful in checking my
understanding and enhanced what I have learnt in class.
For week 10-12, I would like
to learn how to rephrase sentences more accurately as I always have the
tendency to paraphrase it with a different meaning. It is also quite difficult
to link different ideas together in a coherent way. I often make grammar
mistakes unconsciously and thus I need to be more careful when writing and
ensure that I check my essay thoroughly for any errors.
I did make
changes in the summary and reader response because I did not understand some of
the comments. A few comments are hard to comprehend as they are not fully
explained. However, in general, most of the comments are useful in guiding me
to make changes to my summary and reader response.
I am quite
accurate in grading the content, organisation and language. My organisation is quite alright but there is a lack of content for my summary and reader response. On top of that, my language also did not fare very well as there are constant grammatical errors that I have made in my writing.
In my
opinion, I feel that both the audio and written feedback is good ways to get
feedback. However, the audio feedback would further enhance learning. It
provides better explanations since it is more comprehensive and easy to
understand as compared to written feedback. After listening to the audio
feedback, I am able to understand the comments and edit my mistakes with
certainty. Indeed, incorporating audio and written feedback in other courses
would be useful especially if the tutor do not have time for consultation. This
is also convenient as students can refer to these comments anytime.